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Strangler Fig KWO ---> essay
KWO info (Britannica)
Add all OPENERs and DEC (then M3, DRESS UPs, OWL) that make sense
CHECKLIST template
FANBOYS CC RULE Comma Conjunction rule
M 3s
7s and 8s
1s, 4s, 5s, and 7s always take a comma
BW warm up (Wednesday) Take a bad sentence, ditch the banned words, and create an outstanding two sentence vignette
WEEK 1
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Friday, June 18, 2021
Essays (with no name) to people to choose first place winner yesterday.
The kids choose in the group and Aiden and Andre tied.
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Thursday, June 17, 2021
Make sure we have all OPENERs in SF essay that work
M3
DEC
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Wednesday, June 16, 2021
Warm up - reword sentences with banned words.
Added a second sentence to create a vignette
KWO the new LAGNIAPPE strangler fig info
Determine where the info might best fit in your essay - definitely before the comparison to bad habits (Aiden and Julian -- most sentences)
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Tuesday, June 15, 2021
Today we indicated all the stylistic requirements we had NATURALLY included in our essays.
Next we copied and pasted that baby version of the essay to the top of our docs and started adding stylistic requirements.
We worked at finessing our essays to the point that they could not handle any more stylistic techniques without becoming convoluted.
We added the checklist and filled it (so far)
CHECK LIST!
Put it in 2 columns in your doc
w/w (S) (6)
ly (1) (7)
bc (2) (8)
wwwasia (3) (M3 - )
SV (4) (D- )
QA (5)
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All about 8s
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